http://ritztheditz.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ritztheditz.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ritztheditz 2011-05-26 06:06 am (UTC)

Revision: First-Person

First-Person Sample: [Train had learned to expect the unexpected, for the most part, but this was a bit much. He picked up some sort of communicator. He had no idea if this was a one-way thing or if it broad casted him, but it could help to figure out where he was.]

Can anybody hear me? I'm looking for a guy with green hair, amber eye color, eye patch... He wears a white hat. Or maybe a girl with really long blonde hair and pink eyes?

[He glanced around to take in the scenery. Nothing looked familiar. Train heard a loud growl emit from his stomach.]

There wouldn't happen to be milk here, would there? And any kind of food would be nice too...

Hey, is there any work for a sweeper here?

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