Third-Person Sample: So much has happened to Train. He couldn't help but to think about the things that made him who he was now. He hadn't always been so carefree. In fact, he was pretty uptight when he was still with Chronos. Chronos. Those were dark days indeed. The fact that he could kill someone without so much of a thought was pretty bad. He didn't give a crap about who it was or who they could be. He never cared if the family or friends would be sad about their death. All he knew is they'd done something worthy enough for death. He was the executioner.
It really was no surprise to become the top eraser of Chronos. Back then, if he'd told you, "I'm here to deliver some bad luck," you were dead. Everything changed with meeting Saya, though. He was always on his own. As much as Creed liked to say they were close, he meant nothing to Train. He was just someone he occasionally worked with, nothing more. The person who had saved him from the life in Chronos was really Saya. She may not have known it, though.
She was so free spirited. She liked doing what she liked when she liked. She was pretty friendly. It was to the point that she kind of annoyed him at first. For someone who'd been alone all those years aside from his cat buddy, having someone wanted to become friends with you was an odd feeling. She definitely had odd style. The one thing he noticed that time was that even though she had so many odd qualities about herself, she seemed to enjoy nearly everything.
From those days he'd spent talking with her at night, he'd learned to loosen up a bit, but not a lot. She'd taught him what freedom truly was. He was just a caged cat. A domesticated cat that would do everything the superiors told him without a single thought. A puppet for Chronos, if you will. She'd made him realize that that wasn't the life he wanted for himself.
He wanted to live life on his own terms. Something that he wouldn't have known if he'd never met that odd sweeper who lived for herself. When he finally quit Chronos, it was like a breath of fresh air. Sure, he may have had a lot of enemies from that move, but he could take anything they threw at him. He was the top Eraser, after all.
That's not to say that the other Erasers would be easy to beat. He wasn't free from their grasps just yet, though. Creed was convinced that he was under "the witches spell". He never intended on bringing harm to Saya. In fact, though he wouldn't ever admit to it, he felt something he didn't feel for anybody else that he did for Saya. Was it just friendship... or was it more?
When he discovered Creed's note, what did he feel? Was he mad because he wanted nothing to do with Chronos anymore, or was it for something more? He knew he felt enraged. When he saw Saya dead, he lost. The only friend he had ever had was killed. Maybe she was something more to him. Maybe there was even love for her? None of that matter now. Creed had taken one of the most important people in his life away. He would have his vengeance.
After everything blew over, he found himself to be more carefree, but there would always be that overwhelming darkness. He did have to admit that he had a lot of fun teaming up with Sven and Eve, and occasionally Rinslet. Things were so interesting. No matter how much you change, though, you will always have something about you that you had before. No one can completely change everything about them.
Saya's hold on how much he had changed had more of an impact on him than what Creed did. Creed takes away everything that's important. In the end when he had the ability to kill Creed for once and for all, he couldn't do it. He did what he wanted and he didn't want to kill anymore after Chronos. Even if his grudge towards Creed was murderous, he couldn't kill him. That didn't mean he wouldn't rough him up and take away the powers that allowed him to do those things, though.
Revision
It really was no surprise to become the top eraser of Chronos. Back then, if he'd told you, "I'm here to deliver some bad luck," you were dead. Everything changed with meeting Saya, though. He was always on his own. As much as Creed liked to say they were close, he meant nothing to Train. He was just someone he occasionally worked with, nothing more. The person who had saved him from the life in Chronos was really Saya. She may not have known it, though.
She was so free spirited. She liked doing what she liked when she liked. She was pretty friendly. It was to the point that she kind of annoyed him at first. For someone who'd been alone all those years aside from his cat buddy, having someone wanted to become friends with you was an odd feeling. She definitely had odd style. The one thing he noticed that time was that even though she had so many odd qualities about herself, she seemed to enjoy nearly everything.
From those days he'd spent talking with her at night, he'd learned to loosen up a bit, but not a lot. She'd taught him what freedom truly was. He was just a caged cat. A domesticated cat that would do everything the superiors told him without a single thought. A puppet for Chronos, if you will. She'd made him realize that that wasn't the life he wanted for himself.
He wanted to live life on his own terms. Something that he wouldn't have known if he'd never met that odd sweeper who lived for herself. When he finally quit Chronos, it was like a breath of fresh air. Sure, he may have had a lot of enemies from that move, but he could take anything they threw at him. He was the top Eraser, after all.
That's not to say that the other Erasers would be easy to beat. He wasn't free from their grasps just yet, though. Creed was convinced that he was under "the witches spell". He never intended on bringing harm to Saya. In fact, though he wouldn't ever admit to it, he felt something he didn't feel for anybody else that he did for Saya. Was it just friendship... or was it more?
When he discovered Creed's note, what did he feel? Was he mad because he wanted nothing to do with Chronos anymore, or was it for something more? He knew he felt enraged. When he saw Saya dead, he lost. The only friend he had ever had was killed. Maybe she was something more to him. Maybe there was even love for her? None of that matter now. Creed had taken one of the most important people in his life away. He would have his vengeance.
After everything blew over, he found himself to be more carefree, but there would always be that overwhelming darkness. He did have to admit that he had a lot of fun teaming up with Sven and Eve, and occasionally Rinslet. Things were so interesting. No matter how much you change, though, you will always have something about you that you had before. No one can completely change everything about them.
Saya's hold on how much he had changed had more of an impact on him than what Creed did. Creed takes away everything that's important. In the end when he had the ability to kill Creed for once and for all, he couldn't do it. He did what he wanted and he didn't want to kill anymore after Chronos. Even if his grudge towards Creed was murderous, he couldn't kill him. That didn't mean he wouldn't rough him up and take away the powers that allowed him to do those things, though.